From e2d21ef6715aa0e133492d62b7f1b1c09ee38bf7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Peter Smith <peter.b.smith@fujitsu.com>
Date: Tue, 11 Oct 2022 17:22:07 +1100
Subject: [PATCH v3] create subscription pgdocs.

Modifies the subscription_parameter 'connect' notes to make the text
consistent with the warning message when connect=false.
---
 doc/src/sgml/ref/create_subscription.sgml | 8 +++-----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_subscription.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_subscription.sgml
index bd12e71..89d8fc9 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_subscription.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_subscription.sgml
@@ -120,11 +120,9 @@ CREATE SUBSCRIPTION <replaceable class="parameter">subscription_name</replaceabl
 
          <para>
           Since no connection is made when this option is
-          <literal>false</literal>, no tables are subscribed, and so
-          after you enable the subscription nothing will be replicated.
-          You will need to then run
-          <literal>ALTER SUBSCRIPTION ... REFRESH PUBLICATION</literal>
-          for tables to be subscribed.
+          <literal>false</literal>, no tables are subscribed. To initiate
+          replication, you must manually create the replication slot, enable
+          the subscription, and refresh the subscription.
          </para>
         </listitem>
        </varlistentry>
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1.8.3.1