Re: DOCS - pg_replication_slot . Fix the 'inactive_since' description - Mailing list pgsql-hackers

From Peter Smith
Subject Re: DOCS - pg_replication_slot . Fix the 'inactive_since' description
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Msg-id CAHut+PtV2yZGEgpraxUuVTEWS3=T6fVHjpVwHZio8LawzVrECg@mail.gmail.com
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In response to Re: DOCS - pg_replication_slot . Fix the 'inactive_since' description  (shveta malik <shveta.malik@gmail.com>)
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Hi. Here are a couple of minor comments.

1.
+        The time slot synchronization (see <xref
+        linkend="logicaldecoding-replication-slots-synchronization"/>)
+        was most recently stopped.

/The time slot/The time when slot/

~~~

2.
- /* The time since the slot has become inactive */
+ /* The time slot sychronized was stopped. */


Maybe just make this comment the same as the sentence used in the docs:
- e.g. add "when"; fix, typo "sychronized", etc.


/The time slot sychronized was stopped./The time when slot
synchronization was most recently stopped./

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia



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