Thread: Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes

Hello everyone,

I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes

because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a comma before "which").

On Tue, Jul 20, 2021 at 03:58:00PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everyone,
> 
> I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release
> Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them
> is attached.
> One of the replacements changes
> 
> "which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
> "to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"
> 
> because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a
> comma before "which").


Thanks. I added a comma as you suggested, and committed.

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