Thread: Add small detail to RAISE statement descripton
Hi, There is a slight syntax inaccuracy in the description of the RAISE statement - assignments of parameter values in USING. (Chapter 43. PL/pgSQL — SQL Procedural Language / 43.9 Errors and Messages / 43.9.1 Reporting Errors and Messages): "...You can attach additional information to the error report by writing USING followed by option = expression items..." It should, apparently, be like this: "...option { = | := } expression..." The patch corrects this little omission. Attached: fix_doc_raise.patch Regards, Igor Gnatyuk
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On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 11:09 PM Igor Gnatyuk <ig953or@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi, > > There is a slight syntax inaccuracy in the description of the RAISE > statement - assignments of parameter values in USING. > (Chapter 43. PL/pgSQL — SQL Procedural Language / 43.9 Errors and > Messages / 43.9.1 Reporting Errors and Messages): > > "...You can attach additional information to the error report by > writing USING followed by option = expression items..." > It should, apparently, be like this: "...option { = | := } expression..." > > The patch corrects this little omission. Attached: fix_doc_raise.patch > > Regards, Igor Gnatyuk while at it, I found out there is no brief explanation of: <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> and <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> should we add it? one more minor thing. You can attach additional information to the error report by writing <literal>USING</literal> followed by <replaceable class="parameter">option</replaceable> { = | := } <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> items. Each we are not in <synopsis>, maybe You can attach additional information to the error report by writing <literal>USING</literal> followed by <replaceable class="parameter">option</replaceable> = <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> or <replaceable class="parameter">option</replaceable> := <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> items will make it more clear.
Hi. Thank you for your letter. I tried to take your comments into account: I added explanations to the condition_name, sqlstate options and slightly changed the explanations for USING. Attached you will find new patch version. Thank you for your help. Ragards, Igor Gnatyuk ср, 15 мая 2024 г. в 12:18, jian he <jian.universality@gmail.com>: > > On Tue, May 14, 2024 at 11:09 PM Igor Gnatyuk <ig953or@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi, > > > > There is a slight syntax inaccuracy in the description of the RAISE > > statement - assignments of parameter values in USING. > > (Chapter 43. PL/pgSQL — SQL Procedural Language / 43.9 Errors and > > Messages / 43.9.1 Reporting Errors and Messages): > > > > "...You can attach additional information to the error report by > > writing USING followed by option = expression items..." > > It should, apparently, be like this: "...option { = | := } expression..." > > > > The patch corrects this little omission. Attached: fix_doc_raise.patch > > > > Regards, Igor Gnatyuk > > > while at it, > I found out there is no brief explanation of: > <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> > and > <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> > should we add it? > > one more minor thing. > > You can attach additional information to the error report by writing > <literal>USING</literal> followed by <replaceable > class="parameter">option</replaceable> { = | := } <replaceable > class="parameter">expression</replaceable> items. Each > > we are not in <synopsis>, maybe > > You can attach additional information to the error report by writing > <literal>USING</literal> followed by <replaceable > class="parameter">option</replaceable> = <replaceable > class="parameter">expression</replaceable> or > <replaceable class="parameter">option</replaceable> := > <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> > items > > will make it more clear.
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On Fri, May 17, 2024 at 4:39 PM Igor Gnatyuk <ig953or@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi. > > Thank you for your letter. I tried to take your comments into account: > I added explanations to the condition_name, sqlstate options and > slightly changed > the explanations for USING. Attached you will find new patch version. > Thank you for your help. > > Ragards, Igor Gnatyuk there occurrence of sqlcode: + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlcode</replaceable> should be: <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> + <para> + In the syntax of <command>RAISE</command> command with the + <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> or + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlcode</replaceable> options + <literal>USING</literal> clause can be used to supply a custom error message, + detail, or hint. A variation of the example above: + <programlisting> + RAISE unique_violation USING MESSAGE = 'Duplicate user ID: ' || user_id; + </programlisting> + </para> >> options >> <literal>USING</literal> clause can be used to supply a custom error message, >> detail, or hint. "options" should be "optional"? I am not sure we need to explicitly say, "error message, error detail, error hint"?
Hi. Thanks for the comments. I fixed my mistakes by specifying sqlcode instead of sqlstate and changed the phrase with an explicit listing of options in USING. In addition, I moved the paragraph with it below. Please check out the new patch version in the attachment. Regards, Igor Gnatyuk вс, 19 мая 2024 г. в 11:43, jian he <jian.universality@gmail.com>: > > On Fri, May 17, 2024 at 4:39 PM Igor Gnatyuk <ig953or@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi. > > > > Thank you for your letter. I tried to take your comments into account: > > I added explanations to the condition_name, sqlstate options and > > slightly changed > > the explanations for USING. Attached you will find new patch version. > > Thank you for your help. > > > > Ragards, Igor Gnatyuk > > there occurrence of sqlcode: > + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlcode</replaceable> > should be: > <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> > > > + <para> > + In the syntax of <command>RAISE</command> command with the > + <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> or > + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlcode</replaceable> options > + <literal>USING</literal> clause can be used to supply a custom > error message, > + detail, or hint. A variation of the example above: > + <programlisting> > + RAISE unique_violation USING MESSAGE = 'Duplicate user ID: ' || user_id; > + </programlisting> > + </para> > > >> options > >> <literal>USING</literal> clause can be used to supply a custom error message, > >> detail, or hint. > > "options" should be "optional"? > I am not sure we need to explicitly say, "error message, error detail, > error hint"?
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On Wed, May 22, 2024 at 4:18 PM Igor Gnatyuk <ig953or@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi. > > Thanks for the comments. I fixed my mistakes by specifying sqlcode > instead of sqlstate and changed the phrase > with an explicit listing of options in USING. In addition, I moved the > paragraph with it below. > Please check out the new patch version in the attachment. > after git apply jian@jian:~/Desktop/pg_src/src7/postgres$ git apply $PATCHES/fix_doc_raise_v3.patch jian@jian:~/Desktop/pg_src/src7/postgres$ git diff diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/plpgsql.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/plpgsql.sgml old mode 100644 new mode 100755 ----------------- i guess, that means your patch (fix_doc_raise_v3) has some structural problem. so I wrote it based on fix_doc_raise_v2.patch. please check attached. Feel free to change it.
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Hi, thanks for the response and for your corrections to the patch. But I checked my changes by running make html, make postgres-A4.pdf, make postgres-US.pdf and viewing the results: everything is OK. Message 'old mode 100644 new mode 100755' this means, imho, that access rights were changed during changes to the file. I fixed it in the patch fix_doc_raise_v3-bios.patch. Please check it out. Thanks again for your comments. ср, 22 мая 2024 г. в 14:13, jian he <jian.universality@gmail.com>: > > On Wed, May 22, 2024 at 4:18 PM Igor Gnatyuk <ig953or@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi. > > > > Thanks for the comments. I fixed my mistakes by specifying sqlcode > > instead of sqlstate and changed the phrase > > with an explicit listing of options in USING. In addition, I moved the > > paragraph with it below. > > Please check out the new patch version in the attachment. > > > > after git apply > > jian@jian:~/Desktop/pg_src/src7/postgres$ git apply > $PATCHES/fix_doc_raise_v3.patch > jian@jian:~/Desktop/pg_src/src7/postgres$ git diff > diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/plpgsql.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/plpgsql.sgml > old mode 100644 > new mode 100755 > > ----------------- > i guess, that means your patch (fix_doc_raise_v3) has some structural problem. > > so I wrote it based on fix_doc_raise_v2.patch. > please check attached. > > > Feel free to change it.
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On Wed, May 22, 2024 at 11:35 PM Igor Gnatyuk <ig953or@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi, > > thanks for the response and for your corrections to the patch. > But I checked my changes by running make html, make postgres-A4.pdf, > make postgres-US.pdf and viewing > the results: everything is OK. > > Message > 'old mode 100644 > new mode 100755' > this means, imho, that access rights were changed during changes to > the file. I fixed it in the patch > fix_doc_raise_v3-bios.patch. Please check it out. > looks good to me.
On Wed, 2024-05-22 at 18:34 +0300, Igor Gnatyuk wrote: > fix_doc_raise_v3-bios.patch. Please check it out. I think the patch is fine. > + <para> > + <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> and > + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> specify > + error condition name and the five-character SQLSTATE code respectively. > + See <xref linkend="errcodes-appendix"/> for more information. > + </para> There should be a comma before "respectively". > You can attach additional information to the error report by writing > <literal>USING</literal> followed by <replaceable > class="parameter">option</replaceable> = <replaceable > - class="parameter">expression</replaceable> items. Each > + class="parameter">expression</replaceable> or > + <replaceable class="parameter">option</replaceable> := > + <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> > + items, where > <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> can be any > string-valued expression. I think that is unnecessarily verbose. The original wording was fine; everybody can see from the syntax diagram that you can also use := But I won't fight over it. > + In the <command>RAISE</command> command syntax with > + <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> or > + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> you can > + additionally use the <literal>USING</literal> clause too. > + A variation of the example above: I think that the final sentence should be more complete. Suggestions: Here is a variation of the above example: A variation of the above example is: Yours, Laurenz Albe
Hi, thanks for the review. I tried to take your comments into account: - added a missing comma - still left a verbose version ;) - made the last sentence more complete (according to the 2nd option). Attached you will find new patch version fix_doc_raise_v4.patch, please check it out. Thanks again for review and comments. Regards, Igor Gnatyuk ср, 10 июл. 2024 г. в 23:36, Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>: > > On Wed, 2024-05-22 at 18:34 +0300, Igor Gnatyuk wrote: > > fix_doc_raise_v3-bios.patch. Please check it out. > > I think the patch is fine. > > > + <para> > > + <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> and > > + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> specify > > + error condition name and the five-character SQLSTATE code respectively. > > + See <xref linkend="errcodes-appendix"/> for more information. > > + </para> > > There should be a comma before "respectively". > > > You can attach additional information to the error report by writing > > <literal>USING</literal> followed by <replaceable > > class="parameter">option</replaceable> = <replaceable > > - class="parameter">expression</replaceable> items. Each > > + class="parameter">expression</replaceable> or > > + <replaceable class="parameter">option</replaceable> := > > + <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> > > + items, where > > <replaceable class="parameter">expression</replaceable> can be any > > string-valued expression. > > I think that is unnecessarily verbose. The original wording was fine; > everybody can see from the syntax diagram that you can also use := > > But I won't fight over it. > > > + In the <command>RAISE</command> command syntax with > > + <replaceable class="parameter">condition_name</replaceable> or > > + <replaceable class="parameter">sqlstate</replaceable> you can > > + additionally use the <literal>USING</literal> clause too. > > + A variation of the example above: > > I think that the final sentence should be more complete. > Suggestions: > > Here is a variation of the above example: > > A variation of the above example is: > > Yours, > Laurenz Albe
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On Mon, 2024-07-15 at 21:30 +0300, Igor Gnatyuk wrote: > I tried to take your comments into account: > > - added a missing comma > - still left a verbose version ;) > - made the last sentence more complete (according to the 2nd option). > > Attached you will find new patch version fix_doc_raise_v4.patch, > please check it out. Thanks. I have marked the patch as "ready for committer". Yours, Laurenz Albe
Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at> writes: > On Mon, 2024-07-15 at 21:30 +0300, Igor Gnatyuk wrote: >> Attached you will find new patch version fix_doc_raise_v4.patch, >> please check it out. > Thanks. I have marked the patch as "ready for committer". I fooled with the wording a bit more and pushed it. Thanks for the submission! regards, tom lane